A Mother’s Memory

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DR. RAMIREZ STOOPED LOW AND WHISPERED, ‘SHE WANTS TO GO HOME.’

My hands flew to my mouth as I saw Mom sitting perfectly still in the armchair in the otherwise empty visitors’ lounge. I could feel the cold, sterile air conditioning on my bare arms, but my face burned hot. She looked… different. Not frail, not tired, but unusually alert, a glint in her eye I hadn’t seen in years.
“Mom?” I choked, my voice barely a whisper. “What are you doing here? You’re supposed to be in your room.”

The fluorescent lights hummed, casting a sickly yellow glow on her perfectly coiffed hair, a stark contrast to her hospital gown. A faint, sweet scent of lilacs, her signature perfume, clung to her, a smell I hadn’t noticed since childhood trips to the garden center. She just smiled, a wide, unsettling grin that didn’t reach her eyes, fixed somewhere beyond me.

“I’m waiting for your father, dear,” she said, her voice clear as a bell, without the usual tremor. “He’s just getting us some coffee from the cafeteria. He said we had to leave the house before dawn, so we came here early.” My blood ran cold, turning my stomach into a knot of dread. Dad died five years ago; she hasn’t remembered him in weeks.

Then Dr. Ramirez stepped in front of me, his figure suddenly blocking my view of her, casting a long shadow across the polished floor. He put a hand gently, almost protectively, on my shoulder. His gaze swept around the room, then back to my face, a strange tension in his jaw.

He leaned close and his eyes shifted to the door, whispering, ‘We have a problem.’

👇 Full story continued in the comments…My heart hammered against my ribs. “What do you mean, ‘a problem’?” I asked, my voice barely audible.

Dr. Ramirez took a deep breath, his hand still resting on my shoulder, a silent anchor. “Mrs. Abernathy… she’s lucid. Too lucid. And she’s… different.” He hesitated, choosing his words carefully. “Her vitals are stable, even improved. But her brain scans… they’re showing unusual activity. Like… like someone else is in there.”

The words hung in the air, thick and suffocating. “Someone else?” I echoed, the absurdity of it all nearly making me laugh. “What, you mean… like a ghost?”

He didn’t flinch. “I don’t know what to think. But her personality… it’s not her. This… this woman in the armchair… she knows things she shouldn’t. She remembers things…” He trailed off, his gaze returning to my mother.

I turned back to her. She was still smiling, that fixed, unsettling grin. “He’ll be back any minute now,” she said, her voice smooth and unfamiliar. “Your father always liked a strong cup of coffee before a long drive.”

A sudden, sharp pain ripped through my head. I gripped my temples, trying to ward off the feeling. It was like a thousand tiny needles pricking my brain. Then, a voice, not hers, not mine, but *in* my head. *’He knows. He’s on to us.’*

Panic flooded me. I looked at Dr. Ramirez, his face etched with a mixture of concern and fear. “We need to get her out of here,” I said, my voice shaking. “We need to get her home.”

“That’s the problem,” he whispered back, his eyes darting around the empty lounge. “She *wants* to go home. But I don’t know where… or what… ‘home’ is for her.”

We moved with a practiced efficiency born of desperation. We wheeled her out of the lounge and into the hospital hallway.

As we passed the nurse’s station, a nurse called out, “Mrs. Abernathy, you’re out of your room!”

“It’s alright, she’s going for a walk,” Dr. Ramirez said smoothly, his voice calm.

When we were outside and halfway to my car, my mother started to struggle, her hand pulling at the IV line.

“We have to go back! They’ll catch us!” She exclaimed.

“Don’t worry, Mom,” I said as calmly as I could, while Dr. Ramirez tried to get the line to release. “It will be okay.”

Suddenly, as the door swung closed, she looked at Dr. Ramirez.

Her eyes went cold. “You were correct.”

She pushed my hands away, and with a shocking surge of strength, she shoved Dr. Ramirez aside. He stumbled back, hitting the ground with a thud.

Before I could react, she lunged at me, her face contorted in a silent scream. Her hands reached for my face.

I cried, and I fell back.

Then, it was over.

My vision cleared.

I sat up, a single tear tracking down my cheek. Dr. Ramirez, disheveled but unharmed, helped me to my feet. The hospital doors stood open, the late-afternoon sun casting long shadows across the parking lot.

I looked around, suddenly noticing how empty the entire place felt. I looked at Dr. Ramirez, and he looked back.

“What happened?” I asked him.

“She was gone,” Dr. Ramirez responded. “As soon as you got out of the car, it disappeared. I don’t know what it was. But it was gone.”

I stared at the open car door.

“You need to go home, and don’t look back.” Dr. Ramirez said.

We walked up to the hospital to file a report and the police found nothing. They looked into the case and after a few weeks, they closed the case. I did as I was told and drove home. I was scared and afraid. But I got out of the car and headed into the house.

My hands flew to my mouth as I saw Mom sitting perfectly still in the armchair in the otherwise empty visitors’ lounge. I could feel the cold, sterile air conditioning on my bare arms, but my face burned hot. She looked… different. Not frail, not tired, but unusually alert, a glint in her eye I hadn’t seen in years.

Then, just as the memory hit me, a thought.

*’He’s coming now.’*

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