A Midnight Visitor and a Mysterious Dave

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A STRANGER KNOCKED AT MY DOOR AFTER MIDNIGHT ASKING FOR DAVE

I jolted awake to heavy pounding downstairs and my heart started racing instantly. Creep down the dark stairs, the old wood groaning with every step under my bare feet. Peak through the dusty peephole, seeing a frantic face I don’t recognize in the dim porch light shining onto the walkway.

I opened the door just a crack, gripping the frame tight, feeling the cold metal turn slick in my hand from nerves. He immediately asked, “Is Dave here? He said he’d be waiting here tonight.” My husband, Mark, was asleep upstairs, completely unaware of the pounding outside.

I told him he had the wrong address, that no one named Dave lived here, but he insisted this was the exact place Dave had given him. “No, no,” he muttered, sweat beading on his forehead under the yellow light. “Dave promised this house. Said the money would be ready for me.”

He took a step closer towards the small opening, and I could smell stale cigarette smoke and cheap cologne clinging to him, heavy and unpleasant. Why would someone think “Dave” lived here, needing to pay money to a stranger after midnight? This was so deeply wrong.

Then I saw the small, dark bag clutched tight in his hand.

👇 *Full story continued in the comments…*My blood ran cold. The bag. It had to be. My mind raced, trying to piece together a puzzle that made absolutely no sense. My husband, Mark, worked from home. He was a programmer. Quiet, predictable, and certainly not involved in anything that would require a shady midnight exchange. Or was he? A seed of doubt, terrifyingly, began to sprout.

“Sir, I really think you have the wrong house,” I repeated, my voice shaking now. “There’s no Dave here. I assure you.”

He wasn’t buying it. His eyes narrowed, and he tried to push the door open further. “Don’t play coy with me. Dave knows I’m here. Just tell him…” he trailed off, glancing nervously down the street. “Just tell him Ricky is here.”

Ricky. So that was his name. Fear gave way to a strange, icy resolve. I needed to buy time. I couldn’t let him in, but I also couldn’t provoke him.

“Look, Ricky,” I said, trying to sound calm and collected. “I’ll go check. Maybe… maybe Dave is asleep on the couch. Just… just give me a minute.”

He hesitated, his grip on the bag tightening. “Okay. But if you’re lying…”

I didn’t wait to hear the rest. I slammed the door shut and locked it, fumbling with the deadbolt in my panic. I ran upstairs, adrenaline coursing through my veins, and shook Mark awake.

“Mark! Wake up! There’s a man downstairs, looking for someone named Dave. He has a bag… it looks like money. He said Dave promised him this house.”

Mark, groggy and confused, sat up. “What are you talking about? Dave? I don’t know anyone named Dave.”

We went downstairs together, Mark armed with a heavy baseball bat we kept by the door. Ricky was still there, pacing anxiously on the porch. Mark cautiously opened the door.

“Look, buddy,” Mark said, his voice surprisingly steady. “My wife told you, there’s no Dave here. You’ve got the wrong place. Now, I’m going to ask you to leave.”

Ricky looked from Mark to me, his eyes darting between suspicion and desperation. Then, something seemed to click in his mind.

“Wait a minute…” he said, squinting at Mark. “You’re not… you’re not Dave, are you?”

Mark looked bewildered. “No! I’m Mark. What is going on here?”

Ricky sighed, a deflated look washing over his face. “Damn it. I knew it was too good to be true. Dave… he was supposed to be meeting me here with the money from that job. He gave me this address. Said he had to lay low, but he’d send someone to get it.”

“What job?” I asked, my voice barely a whisper.

Ricky hesitated, then seemed to decide he had nothing to lose. “A delivery. He wanted me to deliver this package to an address out of state. Said it was something important. Paid well.”

He opened the bag, revealing stacks of cash. And nestled amongst the bills, a small, nondescript package wrapped in brown paper.

Suddenly, it all fell into place. A few weeks ago, Mark had mentioned a side project he was working on, a “rush job” he couldn’t talk about. He’d been secretive, working late into the night. He said he was using an alias for some security reason. An alias… Dave.

Mark’s face paled. “Ricky,” he stammered, “You have the wrong package. I never asked you to deliver anything.”

Ricky stared at the package, then back at Mark. “What’s in this then?”

Mark didn’t answer. He snatched the package from Ricky’s hand and ran inside, slamming the door in Ricky’s face.

I stood there, stunned, as Mark frantically ripped open the package. Inside, instead of whatever Mark had expected, was a simple USB drive. He plugged it into his computer, and a single file appeared. He opened it.

It was a photograph. A photograph of me. Asleep.

My blood turned to ice. Someone was watching me. Someone knew where I lived. Someone had hired Ricky to deliver this message.

Mark looked at me, his face a mask of horror. “We need to call the police.”

And as the sirens wailed in the distance, I knew our quiet, predictable life was over. Dave might have been an alias, a way to make extra money. But it had also opened a door to a nightmare we could never have imagined.

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