Blood-Red Carnations and a Deadly Promise

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🔴 THE CARNATIONS WERE SUPPOSED TO BE WHITE, BUT THEY WERE ALL BLOOD RED.

I screamed at the florist, but she just kept shaking her head and saying, “That’s what he ordered.”

The air in the shop was thick with the cloying sweetness of lilies, and my skin prickled with a sudden, awful chill. He was supposed to be picking me up, not orchestrating some… bizarre display. Last night we were laughing, talking about finally booking that trip to Italy. “We deserve it,” he said, squeezing my hand.

Everything has been a lie, I swear to God.

But the delivery guy just showed up here with another bouquet of the same carnations. There’s a note.

I ripped it open, and the single word scrawled on the card made my stomach drop: “Tonight.”

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My hands trembled as I clutched the crimson bouquet. “Tonight.” It was a threat, a promise of something I couldn’t comprehend. I fumbled for my phone, dialing his number. Straight to voicemail. Again. Panic clawed at my throat.

I ran to the window, peering out at the quiet street. The late afternoon sun cast long shadows, turning the familiar houses into ominous silhouettes. My reflection stared back, a pale face framed by disheveled hair, eyes wide with fear.

I had to get out. I grabbed my purse, keys, and a heavy vase from the kitchen, anything I could use to defend myself. The front door creaked open as I tried to leave the house. A man stood there, holding another bouquet of the same blood-red carnations. His smile was gentle.

“Hello,” he said, his voice soft. “I’m here to help.”

My heart slammed against my ribs. Help? This was all a twisted game. I swung the vase with all my might. He ducked, the vase shattering against the doorframe. He didn’t flinch.

“Please,” he pleaded, his eyes filled with a disturbing mix of pity and determination. “You don’t understand. He won’t let you leave. He can’t.”

He lunged. I screamed, backing away, tripping over the rug. He grabbed my arm, his grip surprisingly strong. He didn’t hurt me, but he held me fast.

“You need to trust me,” he whispered, his breath warm against my ear. “The only way to stop him is to play along. For now.”

Against my will, I was paralyzed by his words, and I could not move.

We arrived at the house, a sprawling Victorian mansion that I’d seen from a distance. My blood froze as I knew then that it was indeed his house.

The entrance, a dark expanse that seemed to swallow the light, was guarded by two men with cold eyes. I felt their gaze as they stared at me before looking up.

The man then brought me upstairs to a room where there were several people waiting. Each of them had a bouquet of carnations placed carefully by them. I was scared and confused as to what was happening.

That’s when he showed up, my boyfriend.

“So you’re ready for the trip,” he said with a smile.

His smile did not reach his eyes. They held a chilling emptiness.

I looked at the man, and he nodded. “He wants this, and we must give it to him.”

“Who?” I asked with fear.

“You will find out,” he replied.

Then my boyfriend stepped up and showed me that he wanted the trip to Italy, too.

The carnations were supposed to be white. But tonight, they were blood red.

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